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04-ilang-time / 08-maximal-speed
08maximal speedverified

Determines whether bodies of different types recorded by one medium have the same maximal speed, the conditions for it, and what it means for moving clocks and inertia.

External review, round 2 · reviews v2 · verdict: minor issues

# External verification: 08-maximal-speed

- **Subproject:** 04-ilang-time
- **Package:** 08-maximal-speed
- **Verified version:** v2
- **External round:** 2 of 2
- **Date:** 2026-10-10T14:14:34+02:00
- **Focus points:** none

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VERDICT: minor issues

## Summary

The replacement family, invariance analysis, speed bounds, and conditions for equal maximal speeds are correctly derived. The moving-clock and inertia comparisons also follow at the stated approximation orders, and the effective-contract construction appropriately resolves the booking dependence of individual body costs. Two limited claims need qualification: momentum concentration does not establish the position-moment assumption used for uniform bounds, and zero diagonal rebooking is sufficient but not necessary to retain the displayed rest eigenvalue.

## Issues

### I1. Momentum concentration does not guarantee a finite position moment
- **Location:** Step 7, part 3, paragraph beginning “The starts of 05 and 06”
- **Severity:** minor
- **Problem:** The quoted inputs specify momentum-concentrated starts, but this alone does not imply that \(\|\hat x_T\phi_T\|\) is finite or scales as \(|x_T^0|+1/\delta p_T\). On an infinite chain, finiteness of this moment requires suitable differentiability of the momentum-space amplitude; a narrowly supported amplitude can fail that condition. Consequently, the uniform-limit argument is justified for the explicitly assumed finite-moment starts, but its asserted applicability to the quoted starts is not established.
- **Suggested fix:** Restrict this statement to wavepacket families with a finite, uniformly bounded position moment. To claim the stated \(1/\delta p_T\) scaling, specify a suitably regular rescaled momentum envelope, or quote an input that supplies it. Retain the stated finite-size-first procedure for other starts.

### I2. Zero diagonal rebooking is not necessary to preserve the rest eigenvalue
- **Location:** Step 9, paragraph following Eq. (8.24)
- **Severity:** minor
- **Problem:** The statement that recovering \(M_k^T\) as the positive eigenvalue of a displayed body contract “needs \(\alpha^T=0\)” is too strong. For example, choose
  \[
  \alpha^T_{(x,s,a)}=\delta\,\mathbf 1_{s=2},\qquad 0<\delta<m_T.
  \]
  At plane-wave label zero, the displayed body eigenvalues become \(M_k^T\) and \(-M_k^T+\delta\). Thus its positive eigenvalue remains \(M_k^T\) for every clock level despite nonzero \(\alpha^T\). The general non-invariance of displayed rest eigenvalues remains correct, but this claimed necessary condition—and the corresponding “displayed description only” wording—is inaccurate.
- **Suggested fix:** Describe \(\alpha^T=0\) as a sufficient booking that recovers the quoted rest-cost interpretation, not a necessary condition. Preserve the convention-independent formulation using the effective branch gap.

## Focus points

None given.